Why you should name your heroine Cecily
First, the Unleash Your Story update:
(see previous post for an explanation)
Three days into the challenge, the Chocolate Mafia now has seventeen members! As a team, we’ve raised $220 toward our goal already.
As for my progress toward my 20,000 word goal – eh, there hasn’t been much. About 1,200 words or so. I knew this week would be a hard week to write, which is why I kept my goal pretty low. In a normal writing month, I’d be aiming for 25-30K. The darelings start preschool again next week, which will make a huge difference. This week, we’ve been doing the back-from-vacation shopping and meet-the-teacher open-housing and what-the-heck-why-not trips to Disneyland, and I’ve had no energy to write when my day finally winds down.
But enough excuses. I will get there.
One of the projects I’m working on this month, now that I’ve finished my trilogy, is a short story that’s connected to GOTH by a very thin thread. Ever since the idea for this story took shape last year, thanks to a conversation with Vagabond Lindsey, I’ve had the heroine’s name in my head as Cecily. As I write, I’m not sure this is the best name for her anymore…her personality is coming out a bit differently than I anticipated…but that’s of no moment. Although I may eventually do a Find-and-Replace to change her name at the end, I’m going to keep writing her as Cecily. And sentences like this are why:
“Leave him alone,” Cecily added hastily.
Drat. That sounds ridiculous. It’s amazing, how this is curing me of my adverb addiction. I mean, I just can’t have phrases like “Cecily happily agreed” or “Cecily observed her companion warily” or “Merrily, Cecily danced to his side.” Horrible, horrible. Sounds like a nursery rhyme. The adverbs must go.
So, if you have a propensity to overuse adverbs, as I do, I highly recommend drafting your manuscript with a heroine named Cecily. Or Emily. Or Loralei.